Repelled

You women know us men so well
When you know we're lonely you run like hell
None of those stuffy happy endings upon which to dwell
No sentimental musings over the Liberty Bell,

You women know us men so well
Like a Bloodhound that loneliness you can smell
When the man needs you it becomes the death Nell
Of that relationship that could have turned out so swell,

You women know us men so well
All those skeletons in the closet you'd never tell
Commitment today has become a no sell
The disposable myth of the Southern Belle,

You women know us men so well
You flock to the bad boys and reject the nice ones
Wallflowers and plain Janes on the run
Decency and romance not very fun,

You women know us men so well,
Brutes demanding sex and smashing carousels
By couch potatoes they can never be compelled
When men are down they give off an evil smell,

You women know us men so well
When you know we're lonely you run like hell
None of those stuffy happy endings upon which to dwell
No sentimental musings over the Liberty Bell.

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Comment by koshersalaami on February 22, 2019 at 8:12am

If I were you I’d experiment with different rhyme schemes. You need to branch out a bit. 

Comment by Maui Surfer on February 23, 2019 at 9:01am

Want to score Doc? ... and we know you do. The Way to attract women is with CONFIDENCE, not crybaby waaay waaaay woe is me.

Comment by Doc Vega on February 24, 2019 at 8:38am

MAUI I believe you're right and this is one of the few things I agree with you over, but when I'm around women I am courteous, funny, and charming I guess I dwell too much in the past. I won't go on about my personal situation which would simply avail you of more material by which to ridicule me with but if you ever walked in the shoes of others you might actually have a degree of empathy, but alas this must be an unattainable task for the Hawaiian skate board rider.

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