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YOuve the perseverance and talent of John Gardner; fingers crossed, here, as an unnamed insect flits upon an animated black and white WINDSCREEN (moves toward remote)(otherwise pitch darkness) movie eg:geez it's Donna Reed, returns to find guide---holy siege---it's Green Dolphin Street. Sustained hectic suspense of 1947 swiftly clipped up pAstAmodern + orchestrated sound track jeez i need an eye check (pause) back to lodge GitcheGume, south of Two Harbors rather an extremely boggled whatdaysay north shore short drive, horsemen on a hill, look away and they spun already back to a sanctuary (flobknarian) bedroom scene eggeez im myopic as Celine when he sniffed into GM's flagship plant and quit actually before he started knowing that if he went in he-d never get out (pause) children singing in French and someone sneaks a look around the corner thank the high and mighty house he thought again identify the bird song ---holy smoke---a cardinal (finch) whip whippety whip whip now a tall masted ship harbored canvas soliloquy with audience God i heart Donna Reed ship still bobs there behind a 12 quad window she flics-naps opens a parasol on a balcony seems to float descend in midair cheek-kissing her beau well she can kiss my white ass anytime maybe payup for an honest shave code twenty nine she weeps ---holy Schennectitysmokey---now some kinda cliff island /^ suddenly shes cheekbone down dangerously on that smooth (comma) wet sand finally a keyhole to the ocean/one must travel transcend just where are these seaside obelisks that in Aruba Jamaica once now agitated white square inhabited nuns (Im not going to louder this up) sipping soup in bandaged hands a Mother Theresa-like (caps implied) -a languid convalescence more slow pla (ought read plow) and length lumber swings down windscreen right shes back already perted titties refreshed and bursts into tears sparkling earrings and more authoritative whispering outside shes fessing up another elongated b(o)w tie at once waving from the top stair a raft of muscled men barging off well on a barge of lumber and what the fiddellyfrickfrac an earthquake whatamityping within minutes an actualcrevicecrevicecrevice broken trees bigger than picupstics rock showers repetitious explosions scurrying screaming people with no quarter people just slid into the earths crack and now here comes the waterfall neater birdseye and back to the raft and a tsunami tumults upon the wharf finally a man in a black dusty suit tacks up a placard apparent announcement of so

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Comment by alsoknownas on March 23, 2019 at 9:17am

You missed a comma or two.

Comment by J.P. Hart on March 23, 2019 at 10:50am

Mr. Sandman, bring me a dream, make her complexion like peaches and herb...achy: After Thought, llc finlee gone black from blood sweat and tears red as we've at least cyber sigs on my Teflon hoodies for our Whataworld Threats holy owed sub. Bae Buluah and moi ought be in Hong Kong just after this weekends music.

Skipping over the ocean you might see...subterrainingly I've a physic thang wherein hive avoided comma abuse due to fear of karma meant comma splice.

Lost boy and blonde cousins and Uncle Smoke and Fodder one warm Sunday drove none-stop to the Museum of Sci and Ind in Sweet Home.

And there in the biology BRAIN exhibit display: head splices of children. Transparently thin, glassed, preserved fist-sized.

Lost boy saw his reflection and had to pee, no taller than that 1930's sweated urinal.

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Comment by Maui Surfer on April 9, 2019 at 10:53am

llc ! llc ? --- miss my llci  :(  and tvc150   ...  rip

Comment by Maui Surfer on April 9, 2019 at 2:47pm

Musee de S & I  :  Exhibit Circa 1962-  An entire Coal Mine !!!  Dusty on exit.

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