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Comment by Herr Rudolphus der Rude on December 8, 2013 at 10:36am

I made the mistake of posting a "lead in" to this the other day, and instead of a discussion of the concepts and perceptions of the story, I got personal critique ( not here, on Other Site- I would like your take on the story, though, Kosher) Please read the story and discuss IT, as it pertains to our current political divisions/Point of views. It may give you an insight into "The Problem with Rednecks" that you may not have considered.

THAT is what I would like to discuss.

Thanks

Comment by koshersalaami on December 8, 2013 at 4:11pm
The insight it gives me is that rednecks make very funny assumptions based on not a whole lot of evidence, at least tea party rednecks. I don't see a lot of evidence that Obama is a bully on domestic policy, and not an exceptional bully on foreign policy.
Comment by Arthur James on December 8, 2013 at 4:21pm

`

K_sh . . .

Boondocks folk

no blow nose in

TP` Charmin'

Soft ` Toilet

Tissue and

Stuff in

pocket

snot.

City slicks

Smirk and

snort and

No wave

when

sliding

on icy

rural

streets.

`

Stupid is what

stupid be, or

something

like that . . .

As he got on

a city bus . . .

`

The Medal Of

Honor ` Valor

Medal ` Man

Said . . .

He caught

shrimp.

`

Pearl Harbor Memory:

`

PBS ` You Tube of

MOH ` John Finn.

on and on. He

met Barack 

Obama, and

died at 100.

He shot at

planes on

Dec 6th

at Sad

Bomb Day.

`

He told me he

was making love

with his wife that 

Sunday. He raced

To mann His gun

and SHOT into

the air. Memory:

`

John Finn - R.I.P.

Comment by Herr Rudolphus der Rude on December 8, 2013 at 5:28pm
Kosher

I replied more extensively over at Other Site- But the gist is, this isn't about Obama, it's about how a free man will allow himself to be ruled and from whom he will take directions or orders. If I were writing this for Open Salon, I would have titled it "Call Him PJ"
Comment by Herr Rudolphus der Rude on December 8, 2013 at 5:33pm

Art

I 'm afraid I don't really understand much of your poetry, so I appreciate the comment, but I'm never sure how to reply- I think you may have gotten the wrong impression when I used "Villian" in the original Latin sense of "One of the servants at our Villa" ( the Village) sarcastically, to illustrate the sense in which  the "Lord" in this story would have used it. I'm a "Villian" myself, so what do you think about the inclination of a free man to be NOT ruled by a "Lord?"

Comment by Arthur James on December 8, 2013 at 5:56pm

`

I swear this Place is Amazing.

I went off to look at lice, and

snow.

Ice. 

I come for mental therapy. You

think.

No 

stink.

You fun eccentric. You No harm Folk.

I Love Words. It's Amazing we Can

Convey.

O Love the old BC Notions of Lord.

The Thinkers were Breaking Away

From Religious Intolerance, Hate,

And Chains that didn't Jangle as

in Bondage.

No Slavery.

It's Go_fy!

L_rd? _!

as in ` Oy!

`

Lord was secular. Lord of Heavens

meant Galaxies. Celestial Body Mass

was Celectial/Heaven's Above Skies.

We in 21st century might be Better

Off ` Grunting? We Lost Equilibrium.

`

THE DREAM OF SCIPIO ` if written

today?

He be either a Monarch? A Cosmic

Moonbeamed ` Sage/Idiot? K_ok?

Maybe 

Kosh?

K_sh?

Gosh.

Cicero's

fun editor?

A Deleter?

Whatever.

No Worry.

They had Pumic War.

We have Other Wars.

Cicero was enchanted?

He be overly sombre.

Thinkers sense Life's

Transitoriness. Sigh.

I wish I paid more

Attention in School.

`

Attention means At-

Tend and Pause as in

Heed. We seem to

have Low self-esteem.

`

I just signed in and got

a atmospheric pressure

head ache. I no got ale.

I did drink raw goat milk.

It helps me sleep well.

Comment by Arthur James on December 9, 2013 at 2:03am

`

What a Winter wonderland day outdoors . . .

I find it fascinating Here & @ Open Salon.

I have begun paying Attention to the upper button:

`

MOST RECENT ( post, and how many Reads/comments )

`

In September 11, 2010 - WHY I Have No Friends Here

It's a Post by a no Photo Avatar - Whoever comment.

The comment was on L in the Southeast Editor Pick.

Topic - Better Than Sex - L has been Lucky. Cograt.

EP are rare. When I occasionally blogged @ Open

Salon I never got a EP. Troth sent nasty e-mails.

Kerry seem to despise me. Then, DELETES were

COMMON. I'd get no responses if I e-mailed. O!

I Sure Enough Wonder. I bribe with Shoo Fly Pie.

`

I observed ` Her Rudolph der Rude was pleasant.

Kind. 

`

The first blog post @ Open Salon was ` Titled:

`

Why I Like Open Salon

`

Lucifer James commented.

That goes back to 2010

I forgot the Bloggers name.

It's on the Editor Pick today.

Bloggers Rise From dead.

I go back to view Open.

I even so Thoth back.

Woo. What a bird.

Who deletes, huh

`?'

Ill critter delete.

Inner dark bile.

I be general.

Aye, Here

therapy.

Comment by Arthur James on December 9, 2013 at 2:22am

`

I went back for further observations.

Curiosity can kill cats. Blogger name:

`

Retablo

`

He usually comments on EP's

Jgathre ref Good Books Read

Starshine Reshell

Tom Cordle - HOW WE FORGET

`

This Place is Great For Sane Folk

Quatto Speaks didn't get a EP.

I recall a cartoon in Loon Tunes:

`

USA TODAY - a elder couple sit

on a bench in Central Park, NYC.

One Old "Male Buzzard" read:

`

In Washington Post & NYT

The headlines mention

States approve gay

marriages.

`

The Elder Woman say:

`

"Don't they have enogh

damn problems already?"

`

What a diverse world.

Hang with pleasant

folk. I swear it's

wise to shun

nasty blokes.

Comment by Herr Rudolphus der Rude on December 9, 2013 at 3:48am

Art

Thank you for the clarification- once I understand them, your comments are usually the best of the kind of verbal intercourse ( you and?) I seek here.

Comment by Steel Breeze on December 9, 2013 at 5:24am

sorry,can't comment,don't follow links and stuff.......too lazy...

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