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Comment by Herr Rudolphus der Rude on December 8, 2013 at 10:36am

I made the mistake of posting a "lead in" to this the other day, and instead of a discussion of the concepts and perceptions of the story, I got personal critique ( not here, on Other Site- I would like your take on the story, though, Kosher) Please read the story and discuss IT, as it pertains to our current political divisions/Point of views. It may give you an insight into "The Problem with Rednecks" that you may not have considered.

THAT is what I would like to discuss.


Comment by koshersalaami on December 8, 2013 at 4:11pm
The insight it gives me is that rednecks make very funny assumptions based on not a whole lot of evidence, at least tea party rednecks. I don't see a lot of evidence that Obama is a bully on domestic policy, and not an exceptional bully on foreign policy.
Comment by Arthur James on December 8, 2013 at 4:21pm


K_sh . . .

Boondocks folk

no blow nose in

TP` Charmin'

Soft ` Toilet

Tissue and

Stuff in



City slicks

Smirk and

snort and

No wave



on icy




Stupid is what

stupid be, or


like that . . .

As he got on

a city bus . . .


The Medal Of

Honor ` Valor

Medal ` Man

Said . . .

He caught



Pearl Harbor Memory:


PBS ` You Tube of

MOH ` John Finn.

on and on. He

met Barack 

Obama, and

died at 100.

He shot at

planes on

Dec 6th

at Sad

Bomb Day.


He told me he

was making love

with his wife that 

Sunday. He raced

To mann His gun

and SHOT into

the air. Memory:


John Finn - R.I.P.

Comment by Herr Rudolphus der Rude on December 8, 2013 at 5:28pm

I replied more extensively over at Other Site- But the gist is, this isn't about Obama, it's about how a free man will allow himself to be ruled and from whom he will take directions or orders. If I were writing this for Open Salon, I would have titled it "Call Him PJ"
Comment by Herr Rudolphus der Rude on December 8, 2013 at 5:33pm


I 'm afraid I don't really understand much of your poetry, so I appreciate the comment, but I'm never sure how to reply- I think you may have gotten the wrong impression when I used "Villian" in the original Latin sense of "One of the servants at our Villa" ( the Village) sarcastically, to illustrate the sense in which  the "Lord" in this story would have used it. I'm a "Villian" myself, so what do you think about the inclination of a free man to be NOT ruled by a "Lord?"

Comment by Arthur James on December 8, 2013 at 5:56pm


I swear this Place is Amazing.

I went off to look at lice, and



I come for mental therapy. You




You fun eccentric. You No harm Folk.

I Love Words. It's Amazing we Can


O Love the old BC Notions of Lord.

The Thinkers were Breaking Away

From Religious Intolerance, Hate,

And Chains that didn't Jangle as

in Bondage.

No Slavery.

It's Go_fy!

L_rd? _!

as in ` Oy!


Lord was secular. Lord of Heavens

meant Galaxies. Celestial Body Mass

was Celectial/Heaven's Above Skies.

We in 21st century might be Better

Off ` Grunting? We Lost Equilibrium.


THE DREAM OF SCIPIO ` if written


He be either a Monarch? A Cosmic

Moonbeamed ` Sage/Idiot? K_ok?






fun editor?

A Deleter?


No Worry.

They had Pumic War.

We have Other Wars.

Cicero was enchanted?

He be overly sombre.

Thinkers sense Life's

Transitoriness. Sigh.

I wish I paid more

Attention in School.


Attention means At-

Tend and Pause as in

Heed. We seem to

have Low self-esteem.


I just signed in and got

a atmospheric pressure

head ache. I no got ale.

I did drink raw goat milk.

It helps me sleep well.

Comment by Arthur James on December 9, 2013 at 2:03am


What a Winter wonderland day outdoors . . .

I find it fascinating Here & @ Open Salon.

I have begun paying Attention to the upper button:


MOST RECENT ( post, and how many Reads/comments )


In September 11, 2010 - WHY I Have No Friends Here

It's a Post by a no Photo Avatar - Whoever comment.

The comment was on L in the Southeast Editor Pick.

Topic - Better Than Sex - L has been Lucky. Cograt.

EP are rare. When I occasionally blogged @ Open

Salon I never got a EP. Troth sent nasty e-mails.

Kerry seem to despise me. Then, DELETES were

COMMON. I'd get no responses if I e-mailed. O!

I Sure Enough Wonder. I bribe with Shoo Fly Pie.


I observed ` Her Rudolph der Rude was pleasant.



The first blog post @ Open Salon was ` Titled:


Why I Like Open Salon


Lucifer James commented.

That goes back to 2010

I forgot the Bloggers name.

It's on the Editor Pick today.

Bloggers Rise From dead.

I go back to view Open.

I even so Thoth back.

Woo. What a bird.

Who deletes, huh


Ill critter delete.

Inner dark bile.

I be general.

Aye, Here


Comment by Arthur James on December 9, 2013 at 2:22am


I went back for further observations.

Curiosity can kill cats. Blogger name:




He usually comments on EP's

Jgathre ref Good Books Read

Starshine Reshell

Tom Cordle - HOW WE FORGET


This Place is Great For Sane Folk

Quatto Speaks didn't get a EP.

I recall a cartoon in Loon Tunes:


USA TODAY - a elder couple sit

on a bench in Central Park, NYC.

One Old "Male Buzzard" read:


In Washington Post & NYT

The headlines mention

States approve gay



The Elder Woman say:


"Don't they have enogh

damn problems already?"


What a diverse world.

Hang with pleasant

folk. I swear it's

wise to shun

nasty blokes.

Comment by Herr Rudolphus der Rude on December 9, 2013 at 3:48am


Thank you for the clarification- once I understand them, your comments are usually the best of the kind of verbal intercourse ( you and?) I seek here.

Comment by Steel Breeze on December 9, 2013 at 5:24am

sorry,can't comment,don't follow links and stuff.......too lazy...


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