~Kim Gamble  to me - February 10, 2012

 "I expect to see verbiage & wit & ol' fashioned erudite lorianne wisdom, should you feel inclined.    Whip us up a poem, love :-)"

well Kim, since you asked...

Flying For Two (for Rita)

Even now
through the din of pain
I remember it all
the music, the laughter
the frayed edge thoughts
of painters and poets

Even now
as I try to explain
what only you could understand
how we dipped and soared
and sometimes tumbled
gliding high above that sea of words

Even now
I can hear the cackle caw of laughter
the chirp and screech of pain
the squawk of call and response...

call and response
even now

These memories, they're like my skin
tattooed with the feathers
of night words spent
trying to imagine flight

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Comment by lorianne on February 22, 2016 at 12:05pm

Rita - This is how I always imagined you two.

Comment by Arthur James on February 22, 2016 at 12:07pm




Feb 10th 

always causes

me to pause...


I was almost

dead on a Feb

10th date... Now

I am more amazed

and need to Be Silent.


Seagulls are at the

Indian Springs Start

Wildlife 64- Acre 

Lake. They squawk,

and are Migratory.

I go View Seagulls 

now... Nice Thought,

As~ Soar Aloft... Aye

Aloft~ as on Wings as

a Eagle~ Liberty, Free.




Comment by Zanelle on February 22, 2016 at 12:18pm

Excellent!!  Thank you.

Comment by Anna Herrington on February 22, 2016 at 12:22pm

Lorianne, this is lovely and sad and beautiful.

I loved thinking of Kim and Rita, in the middle of the night, dancing all aswirl....

Comment by tr ig on February 22, 2016 at 12:23pm


Comment by lorianne on February 22, 2016 at 12:28pm

yes Art ...free.

Seagulls are quite clever. When you see them in groups stamping their feet, they are imitating the sound of rain in order to trick the earthworms to come to the surface.  Tricky, intelligent lil things. The male seagull is also a wonderful parent who share and takes turns incubating the eggs and then will share in the nurturing and feeding of the offspring.  To me, Kim was always a seagull.

Comment by lorianne on February 22, 2016 at 12:35pm

Trig - I do/am smiling. Hard for me to think of Kim without smiling.

Anna - I always think about them as the nightbirds, swirling & yes! dancing through the darkened hallways of Open Salon late at night

TY Zanelle

Comment by Arthur James on February 22, 2016 at 12:45pm


Thanks lorianne...

I sat in my Home-Lane.

Later I'll Visit LKake...






I return to


early night

awake and

read slowly



no. Nice

Old Past









Comment by greenheron on February 22, 2016 at 1:00pm

Kim was indeed one of those people who you remember with a smile. Not so many one can say that about.

Comment by JMac1949 Today on February 22, 2016 at 1:19pm

This is an outstandingly most excellent expression.  Truly perfect as a tribute to Kim... and Rita.


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